[ Read this in Dutch ]
1,500 words replaced by 1,500 new ones. And this time, they sound right; Friendly Fire is on its way. Too late in the evening now for more writing; turning in. To be off to a flying start at my next sitting, I just did a quick editing-and-outlining sweep.
I found myself marking the fifth paragraph with this comment:
Move mise-en-scene up
to tighten the codslip exchange.”
How disturbing is it that this makes complete sense to me?